Friday, September 6, 2013

Of Love and Relationships

                                                                              Attribution: Sam Photos8.com
Image: Two lovers
Source: Wikimedia Commons (here)

 at sunrise
no words between lovers
just a kiss
to forget and forgive spats
and tiffs are just memories

at sunrise
no words between lovers
just a kiss
not having to say sorry
nor tears but love aplenty

at sunrise
no words between lovers
just a kiss
sealed for all the ecstasy
raucous nights ticklish affair

For Chev's Tan Renga Challenge #13 at CARPE DIEM 'with just a kiss' where we are
to complete the given Wabi haiku (in italics) with 2 lines of 7-7 syllables
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10 comments:

  1. Dave KingSeptember 6, 2013 at 7:16 AM

    Charming poem, most enjoyable read.

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  2. Pat HattSeptember 6, 2013 at 8:36 AM

    Ah yes, that would sure be the way to be and the one to surely find

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  3. Reading PleasureSeptember 6, 2013 at 9:42 AM

    Oh very nicely done. I really like the third one.

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  4. joanneSeptember 6, 2013 at 9:51 AM

    the last one had me tittering!

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  5. Wabi SabiSeptember 6, 2013 at 10:48 AM

    Tickled that you finished my poem just so!! Thank you!

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  6. ChèvrefeuilleSeptember 6, 2013 at 11:32 AM

    Awesome ... three nice completions Hank.

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  7. Holy Ghost WriterSeptember 6, 2013 at 1:40 PM

    What all strive for

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  8. Brian MillerSeptember 6, 2013 at 8:50 PM

    hey i rather like the kiss...no tears, just seal up that night with a kiss...smiles...

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  9. Jyoti MishraSeptember 7, 2013 at 7:25 AM

    Wow..
    I loved this.
    Kiss that shuts everything bad, and brings all good things back..
    kiss to get past anything :)

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  10. brudbergSeptember 8, 2013 at 6:55 AM

    AH.. you made the most of the kiss.. Love that last one.

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