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Image: Golden Autumn Leaves
Source: Wikimedia Commons (here)
green leaves turn orange
amid the colors we see
cold raindrops falling - haiku by JzB
Autumn rains demand a place
Its rights not to be denied
green leaves turn orange
amid the colors we see
cold raindrops falling - haiku by JzB
Extends its influence nicely
Strength reserved for the long haul
Written for Chev's CARPE DIEM responding to JzB's haiku of 5-7-5
(in italics) to complete the Tan Renga's Challenge #16 with a 7-7
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I like the first one. We cannot cling to summer forever! Thank you!
ReplyDeletenice...i like them both but the second def speaks of me.....autumn is that deep breath that carries me through...
ReplyDeleteI, too, like "strength reserved for the long haul".
ReplyDeleteI'm very fond of autumn, and I enjoyed your responses very much.
ReplyDeleteK
Autumn has much color in store and so much more
ReplyDeleteNice collaboration, Hank.
ReplyDeleteI like the first one.
Cheers!
JzB
Colors are the best part of fall
ReplyDeleteThe best seaswon of the year - of beaity, joy, romance, sadness all in one.
ReplyDeleteVery beautiful and colourful dance of autumn season:)
ReplyDeleteI really like the first one.. autumn rain has its own rights
ReplyDeleteBoth completed Tan Renga are gorgeous Hank.
ReplyDeleteGorgeous Hank!
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