Image: From the left, to the right (here)
the 10 of 12 given words:
mundane bedroom apply trapeze
swing act gravity need work feat
not for the mundane but the graceful
not to dance in the bedroom but the ballroom
one-two-three, one two three a move so beautiful
waltzing as fast as the eyes could consume
very much as a high-flying trapeze artiste
to swing with long strides to the left
an act seemingly to defy gravity so polished
measured steps to the right not bereft
of movements across the length of the floor
a need to work with precision so refined
a feat to demand an encore
to apply the required move so defined
MMT's the Whirligig #319
Nekneeraj's at MLMM's Photo
Challenge #366
Bjorn at d'Verse MTB - waltzing
This has a lovely dance of a rhythm to it, and I love how you create a refined, graceful and elegant dance, as befits a waltz!
ReplyDeleteI think this was written so I could see those lovely couples swirling away... you do get dizzy though
ReplyDeleteWhat a graceful dance this is!
ReplyDeleteThis well describes the sweeping moves of the professional ballroom dancers. For the average blokes, waltzing is a bit more sedate, but still a wonderful rhythm to it.
ReplyDeleteThe waltz rhythm in your poem is wonderful and great use of all those words!!!!
ReplyDeleteI like the polished skill you describe that is needed to create such a feast for the eyes of the onlookers.
ReplyDeleteI can't help but, think of Cinderella waltzing around the ballroom with her Prince.
ReplyDeleteA graceful dance poem Hank, thanks for sharing .It made wonderful reading.
ReplyDeleteYvonne.
I like the comparison with the 'high-flying trapeze artiste', Hank!
ReplyDeleteThis is excellent Hank, well written. And I love the pic. I will have to check out that visual prompt site.
ReplyDeleteBeautiful blog
ReplyDeleteFrom one who never learned to dance, is it too late? Beautiful in every way!
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