Saturday, October 20, 2018

Struck at with fury

                                                                                                Author: Juliette Khalil
Image: Strong waves (here)

Struck at with fury
Up against the water lost
What did I do wrong?

Made known the hard way
As strong waves let out a cry
They set the ground rules

Chevrefeuilles' Carpe Diem Leafless Tree #1
introduction "beautiful waves"
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7 comments:

  1. nashvillecats2October 20, 2018 at 8:57 AM

    Excellent Hank short but good to read.

    Yvonne.

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  2. JaniceOctober 20, 2018 at 9:05 AM

    A different approach to the challenge. Well done, Hank.

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  3. TruedessaOctober 20, 2018 at 11:38 AM

    I often feel the cries of heavy water.

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  4. Pat HattOctober 20, 2018 at 1:51 PM

    Have to obey or go in the drink

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  5. JuiOctober 21, 2018 at 4:03 AM

    Nice work! I enjoyed reading this poem.
    Jui Positive Cookies

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  6. Alex J. CavanaughOctober 21, 2018 at 4:09 AM

    Ocean waves will win every time.

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  7. ChèvrefeuilleOctober 21, 2018 at 2:02 PM

    Two strong haiku Hank. By the way thank you for your kind words at Jui's weblog.

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