Saturday, October 13, 2018

much to be desired at the moment of truth

                                                                                             Photo by Scott Bauer. 
Image: A pinto bean variety that resists a host
of harmful fungi and viruses that can otherwise
cheat growers of a bountiful harvest (here)

(The pinto bean is most often eaten whole in broth
or mashed. It is a common filling for burritos)

the use of antithesis through two opposing words
– harvest and plant
– lower and raise

much to be desired at the moment of truth
setting a norm to allay fears at random
engaged in efforts most wanting to refuse
were there fairness in attesting to wisdom?

to lower expectations to then raise the bar
how to balance current deeds for future needs
to draw on hidden talents underutilized this far
worth the efforts a noble choice indeed

satisfaction to harvest fair returns to the plant
to be one step ahead was often elusive by nature
sensitive to growth the eager beaver would want
hoping for bountiful blessings for a great future

Yves' at MLMM's  - saturday-mix-opposing-forces
Mary's at PU's Poetry Pantry #424

17 comments:

  1. Wonderfully written and much to think about. Well done Hank.

    Yvonne.

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  2. Hi Hank.
    Truth is a harvest that isn't always welcome :)

    I played with this prompt too:
    Prospecting?

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  3. balance current deeds for future needs... like that! wise advice!

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  4. I echo Jules' comment in that truth is a harvest that isn't always welcome, nevertheless it is still a truth.
    Life is such a game at times...
    Anna :o]

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  5. Truth always hurts! Wise and profound write 💖

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  6. Sometimes the harvest turns out to be unexpected in many a way.

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  7. Indeed hoping for a great future!

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  8. Truth can be a bitter pill to swallow... but also the sweetest lies are just lies.

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  9. This bean is my favorite! Eaten a lot here in New Mexico. A thoughtful poem.

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  10. Thank heaven for the bean, the staple of so many of our diets.

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  11. The closing is my favorite part:
    "sensitive to growth the eager beaver would want
    hoping for bountiful blessings for a great future"

    ~Ali

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  12. This felt like a dance, one phrase twirling to the next. Very cool.

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  13. Well, Hank, all I know is that we seriously need to raise some lowered bars...

    Blue

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  14. Taking it literally, you made it sound both mouth-watering and useful ... and perhaps metaphorically also.

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  15. Truth. Sometimes bitter. Nice poem, Hank. Thanks

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