Sunday, April 22, 2018

top of the morning - T

                                                                                                    Author: Charlesjsharp
Image:  Cool Clouded Yellow
(Colias croceus) (here)

ah, for coolness,
it rivals the water's depth -
this autumn sky                            Sogi

 abandoned house
the garden taken over -
butterfly home                              Sogi


wet autumn morning
attracts little creatures home
butterfly flutters                            Hank

top of the morning
cool butterfly sought refuge
savagely pursued                         Hank


Note: Hank's two fused haiku 
inspired by Sogi's poems

 Tarkabarka's at A to Z Challenge  -  Top of the morning
Chevrefeuilles' Carpe Diem  -  crossroads 7 this autumn sky
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3 comments:

  1. Pat HattApril 23, 2018 at 2:29 AM

    Have to watch those pursuers as they sneak on in

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  2. CedarwindApril 27, 2018 at 5:53 AM

    I like these...the first for its wet autumn morning feeling and the second, because I hadn’t thought about butterfly predators before but of course they are a menu item for some creatures.

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  3. ChèvrefeuilleMay 2, 2018 at 12:03 PM

    Excellent fusion haiku Hank

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