blessed with breathtaking beauty
reclaimed by the earth Jazzytower
with mother’s blessings became
revered gem of society Hank's
before the decay
blessed with breathtaking beauty
reclaimed by the earth Jazzytower
not unexpectedly bane
of nature’s true attrition Hank's
before the decay
blessed with breathtaking beauty
reclaimed by the earth Jazzytower
when ingrained in lover’s mind
but reduced to nothingness Hank's
Note: To complete a Tan Renga with a 7-7
syllable count to Jazzytower's haiku of 5-7-5
For Chev's CARPE DIEM Tan Renga Challenge #49
Note: To complete a Tan Renga with a 7-7
syllable count to Jazzytower's haiku of 5-7-5
For Chev's CARPE DIEM Tan Renga Challenge #49
Engrained but reduced, living in the past that can be, sad indeed
ReplyDeleteAll three are lovely, Hank, but jthat last one...so sad, beautifully penned. Cheryl-Lynn
ReplyDeleteWow Hank ... this is a beautiful series of poem that you created with your endings ... so in tune with the first stanza.
ReplyDeleteThis is a lovely poem Hank, Good write.
ReplyDeletevarious hues of nature
ReplyDeletea rather sad turn in there...
ReplyDeletei can hope nature reclaims a bit of her earth
and what we make of it...
Three nicely and balanced continuated Tan Renga Hank
ReplyDeleteNice series Hank.
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