The words are:
ball bullets dismal edge
horses locks meandering
plant rose signal spot thrust
He had a ball of a time. Bullets
whizzing past his head. A dismal
sharpshooter was trying to but not
shooting. The shots went wide
He had the edge for the horses
were disturbed by the din and
were acting crazy. It accorded
him a distraction. Shots were not
getting to the target meaning him
Meandering river below could
offer an escape route so he thought
His locks of silvery hair now
sweaty under his Stetson told
him it was time to go He was
waiting for a signal.
Suddenly there was a lull in the
shooting. This afforded him a
spot of relief.
He thrust himself forward and
ran. A rose plant in front with
thorns and all did not deter him
as he dashed across and
jumped
onto a horse. A dog tried to
intercept him but he managed
to get away.
onto a horse. A dog tried to
intercept him but he managed
to get away.
Life as a stuntman was not easy!
For Brenda's hosting of
Sunday Whirl# 177
Sunday Whirl# 177
Ha! Sneaky twist. Thank you.
ReplyDeleteGreat ending...was right there in the wild west and then ended up in Pinewood studios! :)
ReplyDeleteFor all the stars kept from danger by the stuntmen's daring do, they did occasionally suffer for their art while the hero took refreshments in his trailer.
ReplyDeleteLoved the ending, Wonderful read.
ReplyDeleteStuntman! Clever - didn't see that coming. Had a real flair for the Old West there.
ReplyDeletehaha stuntman, nice twist. They never have it easy indeed
ReplyDeleteThere is a sense of brutality when I read this.
ReplyDeleteDear Pakcik
DeleteIn a world of make belief yes! It is likely so
Hank
ha. no. being a stuntman...doing what others fear doing...and taking the risks...i imagine is not easy ....at all...
ReplyDeleteWhat a story of brave one...Nice use of words xx
ReplyDeleteLove the story and the twist was perfect, Hank.
ReplyDeletePamela
Hhahaha, great ending for the poem.
ReplyDeleteUnexpected ending...I like that.
ReplyDeleteGreat .. I didn't expect that ending .. I thought we were back in the Wild West! Loved it Hank and it made me smile!
ReplyDeleteI think I've seen that film! Redolent of the wild west in every line. Bravo.
ReplyDeletenice twist. Love it, Hank.
ReplyDeleteI like action and adventure tales and didn't even notice the wordle words. Enjoyed the twist on the end as well,
ReplyDeleteElizabeth
Smooth writing, Hank. Great western with a surprise ending.
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