Sunday, September 14, 2014

A Therapeutic Feel

                                                               Attribution: CEphoto, Uwe Aranas / CC-BY-SA-3.0 
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Image: Poring Hot Springs (here)

Hot springs healing and
holding out to accentuate
good physical health

Bubbles gasping for
air escaping upwards
Caressing warm skins

Refreshing effects
Natural as mountain spring with
therapeutic feel

Elixir of youth?
Exhorting virtues of
robust male species?

For Chev's CARPE DIEM #562, -  hot springs
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11 comments:

  1. Pat HattSeptember 14, 2014 at 4:26 PM

    Point me to one and I'll hop on in

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  2. JaniceSeptember 14, 2014 at 7:00 PM

    inviting texts.

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  3. AnonymousSeptember 14, 2014 at 7:13 PM

    Ahh! Enjoying the feel of the second haiku --- but the final haiku made me smile :)

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  4. UnknownSeptember 14, 2014 at 7:45 PM

    Ah the robust male species!

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  5. AnonymousSeptember 15, 2014 at 1:02 AM

    Looks wonderful and read to match,

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  6. Balqis DBJSeptember 15, 2014 at 4:25 AM

    So refreshing. :)

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  7. Alex J. CavanaughSeptember 15, 2014 at 5:00 AM

    I've never experienced a hot spring...

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  8. carol l mckennaSeptember 15, 2014 at 8:33 AM

    Lovely haiku on literal meaning of hot springs!

    artmusedog and carol (A Creative Harbor)

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  9. brudbergSeptember 16, 2014 at 4:48 AM

    The last haiku made we longing for a hot spring

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  10. Magical Mystical TeacherSeptember 16, 2014 at 8:36 AM

    Elixir of youth? If all it takes is a plunge in the hot springs, then I'm in!

    Wasteland Hot Springs

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  11. Bastet's Waka LibrarySeptember 18, 2014 at 2:23 AM

    Ah ... the wonders of hot springs ... longing to go and slog.

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