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Image: Bright and Colorful Chrysanthemums
Words are to follow the given sequence:
mirror leaves rain butterfly chrysanthemum
breeze stars clouds ocean daisies cow shed secret
strong mirror shine strikes
leaves replica wrought with show
of rain images
butterfly seeks safe
refuge on chrysanthemum
to breeze through
lightly
stars above dark clouds
glitter over ocean’s waves
like evening’s daisies
flowers bright vibrant
colorful and well nurtured
a cow shed secret
For Chev's CARPE DIEM Full circle #3 - mirror
A secret within the cow shed huh? Not sure I want to step in there lol great use of all the words
ReplyDeleteThey give off a bright shine
ReplyDeleteNicely done, kk. I like how the third poem uses two key words on one line which gives you freedom in the subsequent lines. Clever.
ReplyDeleteCleverly done Hank , most impressed.
ReplyDeleteA great response to the prompt :)
ReplyDeleteThe cow shed secret made me smile -- and the stars glittering like daisies is just wonderful.
The third one ... truly beautiful.. and of course I'm curious about those secrets in the last one.
ReplyDeleteYes, the third is quite nice.
ReplyDeleteLooks like your butterfly survives.
I'm afraid mine didn't
Cheers!
JzB
lovely flowers giving us happiness
ReplyDeleteI specially like the second and third verses ~ Lovely chain of words Hank ~
ReplyDeleteI hope the next "circle' gives the secret away. :)
ReplyDeleteYours seems like a colorful one
Well done indeed a great full circle of haiku Hank.
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