Attribution: Hila Merenfeld
Image: Deep Penetrating Gaze (here)
Red Wolf Poem Wordle #25 with words:
holes halls sleeping spiral moment dismissed
looked suits pondered
veined solace
An evening out for some fun
Through the various watering holes
Halls often full of the young ones
Set to while away some sorrows
Through with sleeping at any rate
Spiral moments shared among peers
Dismissed from the minds woes of late
Strains of music soothing to the ears
Pondered around for some familiar faces
Meeting penetrating gaze of the other
Garbed in suits quiet in subdued solace
Of veined patterns hiding in one corner
For Irene's at Red Wolf Poem Wordle
and Susan's Poets United - An Evening out
For Irene's at Red Wolf Poem Wordle
and Susan's Poets United - An Evening out
Awake and ready to gaze and then pounce I bet haha
ReplyDeleteSoothing and then that last line jolted from the blue. Thanks Hank.
ReplyDeleteI'm glad for your image because your closing lines are made more rich by it...we know then who this other is...thank you for your visit, Hank. Great wordling!
ReplyDelete"An evening out for some fun" indeed.. :)
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ReplyDeleteI thought this wonderful, being a lover of music myself I found your words soothing and relaxing.
How neat! Some are out for fun, some to work the crowd--could be cats and yet could be three-piece suits!
ReplyDeletenice scene you have set...the cat in your picture reminds me of ours that we lost last christmas....
ReplyDeleteThank you for your visit.
ReplyDeleteI do believe there were and are times that many have taken solace in the form of some addiction - bar hopping at all hours is just one of them.
'Cats' come in all shapes and sizes - I like that line about the veined patterns and also imagine a tiger hunting :)
Beautiful photo and great for your poem. I can feel the atmosphere in the bar. Well wordled.
ReplyDeleteAn interesting poem on 'An evening out for some fun' with an underlying seriousness...
ReplyDeleteThat cat had me mesmerized. Part of the "night out" is coming back with something... I guess that could be a hangover
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