Friday, August 15, 2014

Extending its reach beyond

                                                                                 Attribution: Nevit Dilman
Image:  A Wing Icon (here)

Aboard wings of gold
Extending its reach beyond
Bridging the distance

Wings so delicate
Bear the weight of man’s folly
Just partial success 

Destined for success
Stay ahead with wings to fly
Crowd trailing behind

For Chev's CARPE DIEM #540  -  wings
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10 comments:

  1. EnglishRoseAugust 15, 2014 at 11:02 AM

    What an excellent verse, wonderful to read , your message reaching the reader.
    Well done Hank.
    Yvonne.

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  2. Alex J. CavanaughAugust 15, 2014 at 12:05 PM

    We just need enough life to carry us above the crowd.

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  3. Pat HattAugust 15, 2014 at 12:45 PM

    Get away from the masses and soar away

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  4. Arushi AhujaAugust 15, 2014 at 2:02 PM

    i love the last one... destined to win!!

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  5. SkyAugust 15, 2014 at 2:20 PM

    Bright and optimistic.

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  6. CloudiaAugust 15, 2014 at 9:02 PM

    Wheels UP!


    ALOHA from Honolulu
    ComfortSpiral
    =^..^= . <3 . >< } } (°>

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  7. Bastet's Waka LibraryAugust 16, 2014 at 3:05 AM

    great haiku .. we need to reinforce those wings :-)

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  8. Magical Mystical TeacherAugust 16, 2014 at 5:54 AM

    The crowd always trails the one with wings!

    Wingless Butterfly

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  9. AnonymousAugust 16, 2014 at 6:59 AM

    very optimistic

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  10. brudbergAugust 17, 2014 at 9:43 AM

    Wings of hope.. a beacon for us all.

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