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Artist: Starry Night by Alex Ruiz
Image: Courtesy of Tess' Mag
Sunday Whirl words are:
absence baffles cart bones flight language
longing rift rickety stutter sustain cliff
Absence did make the heart grow fonder
Baffled him to think that it was ever so true
She had been long gone over the yonder
Considerate though carted nothing of value
No bones to pick but it was a sudden flight
No language to describe the frustrations
Longings taking its toll and not that slight
A little rift and it triggered off a separation
With only a rickety jalopy to move around
Stuttered all the way along the rough terrain
Wishing to sustain love nurtured for so long
He had wished she had exercised restraints
Waiting alone with just a candle for company
Illuminating the night with images he remembered
Moon crescent over the cliff above just as lonely
How to react to rekindled love unrequited
For Tess' Mag #234 with picture prompt above and
Brenda's hosting of Sunday Whirl Wordle #175
For Tess' Mag #234 with picture prompt above and
Brenda's hosting of Sunday Whirl Wordle #175
That is really sad. Just a few misspoken words can end something beautiful.
ReplyDeleteWhat an ache and longing...i think we all carry something of value inside though ;)
ReplyDeleteA sacrifice like that is one that never wants to get made, carry it with him forever
ReplyDeleteSo moving.
ReplyDeleteWow I can feel his heartache in these words...
ReplyDelete'Absence seemed to make the heart grow fonder' ~ I think, it's the key to cling for in this so painful state...~ feelings're expressed fully in this poem xx
ReplyDeleteNo bones to pick... Well, that would be a first, Hank the Poetry Tank!
ReplyDeleteHis song sung sadly, with not even a bone to pick. Lovely use of your word list, it fits well with our magpie too.
ReplyDeleteAn ache forever felt
ReplyDeleteHank, this is filled with sadness..waiting alone with just a candle..
ReplyDeleteSo sad. A great job, Hank.
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great lines Hank...he like a candle burning out and countless memories shining bright. ....a very painful existence....so sad...
ReplyDeleteSkilled, smooth and rather moving...
ReplyDeleteNicely done....thanks for sharing
ReplyDeleteLongings taking its toll and not that slight
ReplyDeleteA little rift and it triggered off a separation
- real power in these words Hank
Love unrequited is surely painful! Love and Light, S
ReplyDeleteI enjoyed the lovely rhyme pattern...nice...
ReplyDeleteYour moving words make me appreciate the love I have. Thank you.
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