in the pond
reflected trees and drifting leaves
- autumn’s last show Suzanne's
New season’s colors seen
Frigid blue but looking white Hank’s
in the pond
reflected trees and drifting leaves
- autumn’s last show Suzanne's
Slowly making an exit
Prospects of White Christmas due Hank’s
Note: Tan Renga - To add to Suzanne's
haiku of 5-7-5 with one's own 7-7
haiku of 5-7-5 with one's own 7-7
For Chev's CARPE DIEM Tan Renga Challenge #48
Suzanne's 'autumn's last show'
Most cleverly written and that picture really beautiful.
ReplyDeleteA new season of color is always enjoyable
ReplyDeleteReally nice blend of the two poems!
ReplyDeleteHank, that is a great picture and your words fit magically...
ReplyDeleteCan keep the snow at your show haha don' like those prospects
ReplyDeleteVery nice tan renga!
ReplyDeletefrigid blue but looking white...
ReplyDeletenice capture of the inbetween of seasons in that
a brief fall before winter
your continuations are astounding ! its like '' come what may , i will enjoy the seasons'' type of message ! cold winter...but we are here to welcome you / Frigid blue ..Prospects of White Christmas due...! wow !
ReplyDeleteHard to choose which of the two are the better .. each are interesting in their own way. I might choose the second ... love the idea (theoretically anyway) of a White Christmas! Bravo a great take on this callenge.
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