Friday, August 8, 2014

in keeping with nature's best

                                                                             Author: Kabelleger David Gubler
ImagE: Precarious Gradient (here)

as a white dove lands
words unspoken yet knowing                
the glow of the dawn                -  Jamie

will herald bright sunny days
in keeping with nature's best     -  Hank

as a white dove lands
words unspoken yet knowing
the glow of the dawn                -  Jamie

makes one venture out to taste
how salty is sea-water              -  Hank

For Chev's CARPE DIEM Tan Renga Challenge
# 46 with Jamie's haiku  -  the glow of dawn
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4 comments:

  1. Pat HattAugust 8, 2014 at 11:27 AM

    Sometimes we have to venture and see for ourselves how salty life can be

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  2. brudbergAugust 8, 2014 at 11:47 AM

    If the doves could just give us that courage..

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  3. AnonymousAugust 8, 2014 at 6:06 PM

    Both of these are unique in their approach - I've read the second one over and over again -- the dove *knows* -- quite a mysterious feel to it! :)

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  4. Brian MillerAugust 9, 2014 at 5:25 AM

    every time we go to the ocean, i go out and take a handful of water to taste and to clean the sinuses out....love the salt of the air as well by the ocean.....

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