Monday, November 18, 2013

Inner Feelings of Self



                                                                                         Attribution: Vmenkov
Image: Searching for  the Inner Self
Source: Wikimedia Commons (here)

 tickling ivories
scintillating music sound
filling the inner soul             -    Carol
exudes strains of lingering
make-up soothing the being

tickling ivories
scintillating music sound
filling the inner soul             -     Carol
impinging on rough diamonds
hoping few will turn out gems

Written for Chev’s CARPE DIEM Tan Renga  Challenge month # XIX 
building on Carol's haiku 'tickling ivories'
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12 comments:

  1. CloudiaNovember 18, 2013 at 7:29 PM

    Let's hope!


    ALOHA from Honolulu
    Comfort Spiral
    =^..^= <3
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    > < 3 3 3 ( ' >

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  2. Holy Ghost WriterNovember 19, 2013 at 3:27 AM

    One can hope

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  3. Brian MillerNovember 19, 2013 at 3:39 AM

    nice...i rather like the hope for transformation in that second one hank.....

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  4. Gillena CoxNovember 19, 2013 at 4:37 AM

    gotta luv that call of hope, nice completions both

    much love...

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  5. ChèvrefeuilleNovember 19, 2013 at 5:06 AM

    That second Tan Renga is really beautiful Hank.

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  6. Wabi SabiNovember 19, 2013 at 5:27 AM

    Love the second one!!

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  7. Pat HattNovember 19, 2013 at 5:40 AM

    A little hope can go a long way and maybe a gem will be there one day on display

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  8. Sumana RoyNovember 19, 2013 at 6:35 AM

    a gem already....very nice completion....

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  9. Magical Mystical TeacherNovember 19, 2013 at 7:31 AM

    There's always the hope that diamonds in the rough will somehow become lustrous!

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  10. AnonymousNovember 19, 2013 at 3:10 PM

    Powerful completion with real insight to the haiku and very enlightened soul you are ~ thanks, carol, xxx

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  11. AtreyeeNovember 20, 2013 at 10:45 AM

    Loved the completion laced with hope:-)

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  12. sunNovember 20, 2013 at 9:42 PM

    it is good to have hope - really like the second set. thank you.

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