Artist: Richard Ansdell
Image: An Ewe, Lambs and Heron Beside a Loch
Standing tall majestically well-bred
Mother’s call stamped authoritatively
Within proximity a protector
Where a heron is considered
a threat
Sauntering a regal pose glaringly
undaunted, unflinching all to savor
Fluffed coat of noble breeding suavely decked
Furtively fragrant and impeccably
placed blessings rightly procured to endure
Ewe, vibrant unwilling to segregate
Gregarious thriving nature of fairly
accepted friendship,
a sober gesture
Young lambs of safely groomed family trait
An outlandish future cautiously made
Note: An ABC ABC ABC ABC and AA structure. Kept to the 10 syllables on each line
Written for Sam's hosting of Forms for All at d'Verse - a Trireme sonnet
a future cautiously made for sure...seriously hank, this rocks...great job with the form...and you used big words...ha...they scare me with form at times...not a word misplaced in this one...
ReplyDeleteNot just a trireme sonnet - and you carried that structural exercise to a perfect conclusion - but also an ekphrastic poem, one that pays perfect homage to the artwork that it draws its inspiration from. Excellent job!
ReplyDeleteJust perfect as said above. Nothing more to add.
ReplyDeleteYou have really created a fine sonnnet here, Hank & have interpretted the meaning of the picture beautifully!
ReplyDeleteYou aced the form of course that is the norm, and friendship is grand as one traverses the land
ReplyDeleteI specially like the ending couplet ~ Nice work on the challenging form ~ Cheers ~
ReplyDeleteAn elegant sonnet, beautifully developed.
ReplyDeleteA Regal poem :)
ReplyDeleteA fine trireme sonnet to interpret your chosen artwork. Nice to see the use of near-rhyme too :-)
ReplyDeleteLovedt he rhyming pattern ... well conceived poetic tale !!!
ReplyDeleteNow this is just beautiful... I agree with Tigerbrite! Absolutely regal :)
ReplyDelete...second line in your second tercet exceeded by 1 count... you may:
ReplyDelete(1) omit 'e' in sauntering & have it replaced by an apostrophe ---
" Saunt'ring in a regal pose glaringly";
(2) omit 'in' ---
" Sauntering a regal pose glaringly"; or
(3) omit 'a' ---
" Sauntering in regal pose glaringly"
(4)...ignore me and smiles...hihi...
...i enjoyed this a lot...and you focus on the subject & with the three primary elements present in the painting really shows here...smiles...
**your focus...
DeleteThanks buddy! I've omitted 'in' How come I've had 11 fingers when I counted! Jeez!
DeleteHank
loved the way u concluded..
ReplyDeleteoutlandish future cautiously made
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