Sunday, February 10, 2013

Loving You!

                                                                     Image: 'Artwork' by Joseph Lorusso
Image: Courtesy of Tess' Mag

You had sounded so tense and desperate
I rushed over here when I got your tweet
What's up? I told myself not to be late
Nothing pressing I thought we should meet

I'm really so glad nothing's the matter
You had me worried for one brief moment
Been meaning to call but something or other
Got in the way that got me off tangent

I thought we agreed to meet in a few days
That was the reason why I was so afraid
I'm sorry Honey, I was aware but as I laze
thoughts of you swirled wildly in my head

Best we meet I decided to call you anyway 
I just can't wait to call you this time
I know it may just be another few more days
But I'll kiss anyway for Happy Valentine!

 Written for Tess' Magpie Tales #155

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20 comments:

  1. Al-ManarFebruary 10, 2013 at 10:03 PM

    Since Valentine is long way away
    Let's do it on Chunese New Year to-day

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    1. kaykualaFebruary 11, 2013 at 12:33 AM

      Gosh Pakcik, it rekindles fond memories. Yes, today and any other day so sweetly!

      Hank

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  2. ninotazizFebruary 10, 2013 at 11:17 PM

    That's right, Pakcik!

    Now Sir Hank...

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  3. anthonynorthFebruary 11, 2013 at 12:55 AM

    Valentine's certainly brings out the romantic. Nice one.

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  4. BerowneFebruary 11, 2013 at 1:41 AM

    Ardent and touching at the same time. Well done.

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  5. Brian MillerFebruary 11, 2013 at 3:27 AM

    smiles...nice...hey with that kind of reception i will call her quite often you know...ha...and valentines...ah wont be long...smiles...

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  6. UnknownFebruary 11, 2013 at 5:10 AM

    Sometime's its too hard to wait for that phone call!

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  7. Pat HattFebruary 11, 2013 at 5:28 AM

    Nice addition of the tweet, as many go that beat and yeah the day is almost here, that is hated by my little rhyming rear..haha

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  8. Little NellFebruary 11, 2013 at 8:41 AM

    Any excuse for an early Valentine kiss - You sounded so tense? It worked though didn't it - just like your poem.

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  9. HelenFebruary 11, 2013 at 9:26 AM

    Breathing a sigh of relief ... at first I thought you might be heading into something disastrous!

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  10. Kathe W.February 11, 2013 at 11:04 AM

    why wait a few days! Very romantic!!

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  11. Susan AndersonFebruary 11, 2013 at 11:06 AM

    haha

    Surprised he is waiting so long to see her again...

    =)

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  12. LynFebruary 11, 2013 at 11:17 AM

    True romance lives, indeed...takes my breath away...

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  13. 21 WitsFebruary 11, 2013 at 12:00 PM

    Everything is better with a kiss!

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  14. AnonymousFebruary 11, 2013 at 1:01 PM

    i like how it started with running over to the restaurant because of the tweet and then at the end it was all about valentines day.

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  15. AnonymousFebruary 11, 2013 at 1:18 PM

    the protagonist sure got fooled about the purpose of coming there!!

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  16. Silent Otto February 12, 2013 at 4:19 AM

    Very clever, Hank, tou had me fearing the worst for nine tenths of it. What could possible be wrong ?

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  17. hyperCRYPTICalFebruary 14, 2013 at 3:03 PM

    Kisses are yummy!

    Anna :o]

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  18. MargaretFebruary 16, 2013 at 7:53 PM

    All for a kiss. Love the "can't wait" of young love... sigh.

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