Photo Credits: Courtesy of Jinsky's Tandem
Striving harder
The day droops listless
Frantically grabbing at
The straw, a lifeline
Must strive, must get it
Where there is life there is hope
Grab it, try again
Others have done it
And there is no telling but
Always looking up
Submitted haiku styled for:
Mary's tribute to Hollywood's great Michael J Fox and his inspiring book 'Always Looking Up' at Mary's Poetry Jam
Submitted for
Jinsky's Tandem #7 allowing us to choose one of her photo images above
Submitted haiku styled for:
Mary's tribute to Hollywood's great Michael J Fox and his inspiring book 'Always Looking Up' at Mary's Poetry Jam
Submitted for
Jinsky's Tandem #7 allowing us to choose one of her photo images above
Very true just keep on going at it and never give up.
ReplyDeleteYes, it is true, where there is life there is hope! Very nicely crafted message here!
ReplyDeleteVery meaningful message in your haiku set. I believe in striving harder.
ReplyDeleteI see you are following both my blogs.. thank you.
A clever haiku combination, as well as Jam and Tandem! Thank you for including my graphic in the mix, and for helping to pedal the Tandem.
ReplyDeleteI agree with Jinksy. You've adapted the style very well. It didn't even strike me at first that this was Haiku. Well done.
ReplyDeleteVery cleverly written, most enjoyable.
ReplyDeleteYvonne.
Where there is life, there is hope....wonderful.
ReplyDeleteGood to see you striving harder!
ReplyDeletesmiles. i think that is a very positive way to live life hank...hope is a powerful force...
ReplyDeleteThis is beautiful ...
ReplyDeleteMy my you are all so positive. Wish I could be. Nice write.
ReplyDeleteMelanie
yeah you are right Pareng Hank. "Where there is life there is hope!" My fingers and toes are not enough to count how many times I fell but still here I am.
ReplyDeletenice one Pare!
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