Author: Pedro Ribeiro Simões
Image: Making out (here)
Making it together taking the risks
inherent in all permutations. But
some few rudely discover an
unworthy partner
Brushing off the bad from the
good twirling the wheel of fortune.
For two hearts to elucidate
their eloquence
(44 words)
Jade Lisa at d'Verse Quadrille#185-brushing-the-dust-off/
Hank, your poem elucidates the state of relationship reality well. If you find the right one you're blessed. If you don't, you'll find yourself on a bumpy road of unknown length...
ReplyDeleteIf you find the good one - the wheel has been kind, indeed ~ Truedessa
ReplyDeletewell put, not all relationships go well
ReplyDeleteHopefully, the bad never returns once the heart falls in love
ReplyDeleteAn unworthy partner is not worth it. Good to brush it off.
ReplyDeleteHank ~ this piece is so true and also true to life...
ReplyDeleteMuch love,
David
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