Saturday, October 2, 2021

to love and be loved

                                                                                              Author: Carrie
Image: Two in One (here)

the 12 given Wordle words:
find make faces father men bitter became 
beard buying mends bowed blocks

never had it so good
to find it all in one
a make-up on faces
for a father's child
now fully grown
men's privilege
to adore and forget
bitter encounters and
other unpleasant memories

what became of women's
tenderness in turn for
mustache and beard
to love and be loved
looking for the blessings

buying for time
that mends the heartache
with heads bowed
both looking forward
minus the mental blocks
to hug each other again

MMT's The Whirligig Wordle #338
Carrie's The Sunday Muse #180

13 comments:

  1. What became of tenderness indeed? It seems sadly lacking these days.

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  2. Thought provoking Hank. Tenderness is something the world needs more of for sure! Always glad to see you at the Muse my friend.

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  3. That sense of pause--how long will it take to find the blessings to ease the heartache--catches and doesn't let go.

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  4. Tenderness seems to be a fleeting thing in today's world.

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  5. We all need to give that tenderness to others which we need so badly ourselves.

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  6. Tenderness, compassion, and understanding are out the window these days.

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  7. Luv your perspective on the child on a woman

    Happy Sunday

    Much💜love

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  8. "minus the mental blocks
    to hug each other again" - so much!!!

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  9. My grandfather used to smear his tobacco juice onto our cheeks while hugging us.
    Good job, Hank!! You nicely used all your wordlist here!!
    ..

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  10. A sadness and longing in these words that touch the heart. Sometimes when bitterness goes out the door tenderness comes in.

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  11. Hank, you went incredibly deep in this poem ~~~ I love it.

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