Attribution: Nigel Chadwick
Image: Birds Skimming the Water (here)
10 of 12 given words:
birdseed capture heart
ludic (playful in an aimless way)
descendent askance
edelweiss (a liqueur flavored with alpine flowers)
lantern gnash curse
birdseeds placed in the empty cage
with intent to capture their hearts
ludic in a way trying to lure them in
but as a descendant of a wild predator
they looked askance at all the furore
thoughts seemed numbed of edelweiss
they still advanced forward safety as a group
but a sudden gust with force
like a lantern caught in the wind
slammed the window with a loud bang
it tweaked their focus off they flew again
knowing for certain unsafe to be back
how he gnashed his teeth with fury
how silly to have left the aviary ajar
was there a reason to curse and rant
for forgetfulness endured
was a grim lesson
For MLMM's Wordle #133
Elizabeth's Creativity Challenge Day 22 - endure
Sometimes a little forgetfulness can sure result in a big fuss, not always needed though.
ReplyDeleteI really love those opening lines, the imagery. Very poignant piece
ReplyDeletemlm
Lovely, and also a beautiful view!
ReplyDeleteForgetfulness can be a painful thing, until it too is forgotten,
DeleteElizabeth
Smart birds, to band together and not succumb to the bait. Let us hope the populace as a whole will follow their example. Smiles.
ReplyDeleteLucky for those birds
ReplyDeletemuch love...
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ReplyDeletemuch love...
Lesson learned!
ReplyDeleteAnd I'm not a bird....
P.S. I gave you wings.
love how you used these words to construct this whimsy
ReplyDeleteMost true what you say about the birds, a pity we human don't folllow their example.
ReplyDeleteYvonne.
I love the image in the first couple of lines, Hank, the birdseeds in the empty cage, hinting loneliness and foreshadowing the ending.
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