Image: Snow Flakes Slowly Floating
at 'Snow Birthed Tales' (here)
given words:
snow cabin ice
With folding of hands together
More in acts of prayers shown
A coolness to a given cheer
Free yet perplexed being alone
Warmth in the cabin sweltering
Despite thick snowfall outdoors
Unusually luxuriant in its blessings
Ice on the road none that bothers
Such an undertone augurs well
Watered down a little in earnest
Within the few days would be swell
Sustenance to a White Christmas
For Magaly's at Real Toad's - poetry and flash fiction
of not more than 13 lines
Elizabeth's Creativity Challenge Day 20 - water
Because I have the sense of humor of a hormonal teenage boy, I can't stop grinning at the last line of the first stanza.
ReplyDeleteDefinitely a favorite way to keep warm in the winter
ReplyDeleteReally like the image. Some sense of conflict, yet a warm and peaceful undertone here. As a self-proclaimed hermit, I rather like the idea of being alone in a snow-encased log cabin.
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I got a sense: with each stanza, one further step back. Well done.
ReplyDeleteTo be inside all warm and the outside blustery - bliss
ReplyDeleteLove your take on this Hank, I can totally picture that warmth❤️
ReplyDeleteInside is swell when that white stuff begins to fall
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