Wednesday, June 29, 2016

Finding it hard to understand

Image: Hunk of a guy (here)

the 12 given words:
style grammar sentences voice topic repetition  
redundant tenses fragments draft  lingering,conclusion,

queasy violent unruly
Finding it hard to understand
What prompts the elegant lady
Who speaks in style with good grammar
Typically short sentences in a soft voice
Sexily articulated on any topic 

But in the presence of her man
Who acts 'violent' in a good way
just as she expects she just melts

She begins to speak in repetitions often redundant
She gets all tensed speaking in fragments
Somewhat queasy what with a whiff
of the draft that drifts by but she likes it

'Unruly' translates to the lingering male odor
A scent bewitching to the sensitive female 
In conclusion a 'sweaty' male is a desirable male

MMT's Sunday's Whirligig #66
Thomg's 3WW #486
Grace's at d'Verse Poetics: empire of scents
Marian's The Tuesday Platform at Real Toads


  1. not for me, it isn't I admire the intellectual type of which my hubby is one in spades.

  2. I wonder if this is true... but maybe pheromones work.

  3. Sometimes we can't help ourselves I guess - as long as she is happy and safe go for it!

  4. I am giggling with the transformation of the lady at the smell of sweat of her man. If she is happy why not, smiles.

  5. Well, dang! I must be.... I sweat way too often! :) Fun poem! Fun set of words! Enjoyed your wordplay.

  6. Each to his own. In my mind he has a careless disregard for others feelings expecting them to like him whatever because he is the best...or so he thinks. She will learn in time.

  7. In most ways I am glad that I am not like him.
    You depicted him well, a guy most guys don't want to be and a guy that some women fall for. And yes, I concluded a long time ago that pheromones do work.

  8. Fun to read but wouldn't like to be like that.


  9. Everyone has their own type I guess, but dumbing one's self down seems rather well dumb haha

  10. haha! I can appreciate her reaction. Cute!

  11. Clever! But I confess I am not attracted to the sweaty male. Showers first, please. ;)

  12. I understand your bewilderment. But not all women like muscles and sweat, let alone domineering behaviour.

  13. Haha....from the comments, I see that your conclusion has elicited some debate ;-)

  14. If it makes her happy, go for it but I'll take my sweet intellectual any day. Interesting poem.

  15. I used to be a desirable male... Half my life ago, Hank! Time flies.

  16. My honey is a gourmet those scents are the ones that endure.