Image: A descendant of Newton's apple tree, planted in the
Botanical Gardens, the University of Tokyo, Japan (here)
From deep in the spring
clear reflections rise to meet
falling plum petals (Southard)
it leaves one breathless to see
them float gracefully to earth (Hank)
From deep in the spring
clear reflections rise to meet
falling plum petals (Southard)
luckily not an apple
that it could create history (Hank)
For Chev's CARPE DIEM Tan Renga
Challenge #89 with Southard
Lovely completion, Hank.
ReplyDeleteTo think if it could do something as much as newton's did.
ReplyDeleteA seed from the great
ReplyDeletePlum blossoms are so significant in Japanese culture--that subtle beauty and fragrance, like your poem.
ReplyDeleteThis was just supberb Hank. Werll done.
ReplyDeleteYvonne
Beautifully done
ReplyDeleteALOHA from Honolulu,
ComfortSpiral
=^..^=
Liked both your endings ... but the second made me smile! Good go Hank! Bastet
ReplyDeleteI like them both:)
ReplyDeleteLovely response! I like them both :-)
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