Tuesday, July 15, 2014

Sitting quietly lost in thoughts

                                                                                              Attribution:  LaurMG
Image: Frustrations at his Desk  (here)

Sitting quietly lost in thoughts
Blank look traveling in space
Unperturbed to hankerings of the lot
Lips sealed spewing ideas in a rage

Cornering all resources unto himself
Who was he to be so selfish
Release your thoughts,your mind yourself
Others were waiting for them with relish

He could no longer hold on tight
Cut the cords that he did
Now his mind exploded bright
Working double quick time for his bid

Such the feelings an unshackled being
Released from writer's block sans tightening
Sudden surge of thoughts provoking
Finally mouth-watering and searching

For d"Verse's 3rd Anniversary  -  celebrating poets

21 comments:

  1. i like being unshackled....having the freedom to express myself in verse...i think poetry as a vehicle allows you to express things that other writings dont...and then painting and visual arts def do in different ways....

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    1. I agree..poetry is the best literary expression of crystallised emotion.

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  2. And when the idea hits, it is an explosion.
    (Although I get excited to see sparklers.)

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  3. I really like this part: Sudden surge of thoughts provoking

    I am so happy when I get this in writing as though thoughts and words come easily ~ Have a good week Hank ~

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  4. I think you just took us through the poetic process, Hank--in verse!

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  5. The idea strikes and the match is sure lit, out things come

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  6. I like what Brian said.

    ALOHA from Honolulu
    ComfortSpiral
    =^..^= <3

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  7. ah it is good when those words flow again...and yes.. others are waiting for them to read what their fellow poets span...

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  8. An interesting progression of the creative process.

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  9. Yes, you tell it like it really is.

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  10. Nice... I know how frustrating the writers' block can be. I have been sort of dealing with it since the beginning of this year. And that release we feel once the words surge out is wonderful. Well-penned. :-)
    -HA

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  11. I love how we really have no control over the creative flow sometimes...it finds us, we don't find "it".

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  12. How intriguing to link in the idea of selfish, the idea of mouth-watering--views of the waiting fans and/or devotees waiting for the latest supper served by their favorite chef. Very fine!

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  13. You describe the end of writer's block so well. It is like finding freedom. You express some lovely thoughts here Hank.

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  14. Yes, exactly! So lovely to let the muse out to dance!

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  15. I wish I didn't know how this felt. My blank look takes long journey through space. Glad you found your way back.

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  16. holding it all in can be quite overwhelming...even more so when the words refuse to settle in any logical (or even illogical) way. it definitely is nice when one can finally break through.

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  17. Writer's Block ... how I wish I knew to get rid of it :-/

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  18. Knowing others are coming to read helps us unlock those words...good one, Hank!

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  19. Unshackled is the way to go, Hank. I love this.

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