Attribution: High Contrast
Image: Rudbeckia Faded through Summer Heat (here)
Note: Tanka is a short Japanese poetry
form with a 5-7-5-7-7 syllable pattern
When heat of summer
is allowed its way clinging
Autumn bids its time
but delay can impact on
those long suffering patients
Dryness worsens coughs
of those afflicted but plea
to Providence can
result in smooth transition
as it had always happened?
Note: Inspired by Shiki who happened
to be a long suffering TB patient
For Chev's CARPE DIEM's G-Writer #6 - Jen's on Shiki
Beautifully penned tanka ... though so very sad.
ReplyDeleteThe clinging of the heat can sure make one feel beat
ReplyDeleteI feel dried out and withered and the day hasn't hit yet.
ReplyDeleteStrong words here Hank
made me think of the wild west...where people moved to particular areas so that the dryness would help their symptoms.....
ReplyDeleteEverything hinges on "always," doesn't it, Hank?
ReplyDeletePeering Under the Bean Leaves
Awesome Hank ... I wast aware of you being such a great tanka-poet ... really nicely composed and so in tune with the suffering of Shiki. Thank you!
ReplyDelete** ''I wasn't" it had to be :-)
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