The Sunday Whirl
The given words:
Bear,bend,bird,bridge,fallen,heaven,island
lane,meadow,retreat,rock,unstable,wild
Bear in mind
that
A bend of the
road
Or a fallen bridge
May not be such
An obstacle
A meadow in heaven’s
Likeness is a savior in a
Lane of peace a
likely
Retreat from
Birds of prey
It may not rock
the
Unstable nature
of a
Wild
imagination but
Can well be a catalyst
An island paradise
Is still within reach!
Written for Brenda's hosting of Sunday Whirl Wordle #115 and Poets United's : Poetry Pantry #156
Written for Brenda's hosting of Sunday Whirl Wordle #115 and Poets United's : Poetry Pantry #156
An island of paradise
ReplyDeleteis still within reach. Beautiful and full of hope
nice...this is like a kernel of teaching to be opened slowly hank....cool lines...the fallen bridge not an obstacle...one to ponder...the lane of peace being a retreat...very cool man...
ReplyDeleteNice! Especially your first stanza for me--full of hope!
ReplyDeleteOh, I DO hope that an island of paradise IS still within reach. I am going to keep searching!
ReplyDeleteAmen to that!
ReplyDeleteI like the idea of that paradise.
ReplyDeleteHank,
ReplyDeleteIt is always nice to retain hope, even in spite of the disasters encountered along the way...An island paradise is worth dreaming about:)
Happy Sunday,
Eileen:)
I really like the second stanza, Hank. There is so much truth in it. Well wordled sir.
ReplyDeletePamela
Hank, you rocked the wordle, kiddo! I love the premise of this poem, and agree whole-heartedly.
ReplyDeleteAlways away around or through, just have to think out of the box at your zoo
ReplyDeleteYes, a paradise is still within reach. Well done.
ReplyDeleteyou are always great Hank, your poems are simple, easy on the read, yet fill with wisdom and what should be the obvious.
ReplyDeleteMay we all find our paradise:)
ReplyDeleteLet's hope we can always reach that paradise. Nicely done.
ReplyDeleteLike to find that island
ReplyDeleteVery creative and original. Enjoyed it a lot. Many thanks.
ReplyDeleteGreetings from London.
An idyllic place for the ultimate rest Hank. An abode where peace and bliss dwell!! It is nowhere else but it is here itself!!
ReplyDeleteHank, I think this is one of the best writings I've read from you. So beautiful and flows with such ease!
ReplyDeleteBeautiful!
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