Still Life by Jean F. de Le Motte
Photo Credit: Courtesy of Tess' Magpie
Photo Credit: Courtesy of Tess' Magpie
Been a long time since
You had left without a word
I could only yearn
There were some letters
and ‘papers. Hung them up just
for your
convenience
It was just a joke
You took it seriously, let
bygones be bygones
No comments again
Your hairstyle is your own choice
ha...nice mix of emotions hank...i was feeling the loss...then you made me chuckle with it being a comment about the hair...smiles.
ReplyDeleteBrian
ReplyDeleteFunny sometimes! People can break up on petty matters
Hank
ha! This one made me laugh. Nicel done, Hank.
ReplyDeleteWry humour where some hurt mixes with the nonsensity of it all!
ReplyDeletehaha yes some people just have no humor
ReplyDeleteSo sometimes it is best to keep our trap shut
But then that can be hard to do as well
Aw, Hank, true to life! Until true love comes relationships can be soooo fickle.
ReplyDelete(I think it is the same way when love fades; seen than before and been there myself too.)
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punchy imagery...keep this style going!
ReplyDeleteHa. I love this. I know it's kind of sad, but it made me smile with the truth it expresses. Really nice Hank.
ReplyDeleteHere's hoping I never let a hairstyle get in the way of a good relationship ~ though an apology like this might help repair things ........ :)
ReplyDeleteThat made me smile....really shines a light on how absurd life is sometimes and the things that we focus on.
ReplyDeleteThere is just a hint of regret here, but I’m reading between the lines So often an offhand remark can be deeply wounding.
ReplyDeleteHumor with a bit of snarky...love it!
ReplyDeleteThere is an invitation in here, yes? Yet, the humor--you already know that silence would only be saying the same thing in a different way.
ReplyDeleteLove the humor in this. Good one, kiddo!
ReplyDeletethats a lovely humorous take on the picture. personally, the rule of 'yes dear' is the safest one to follow.voicing your own opinions or even having them, is not something that relationships take very kindly!
ReplyDeleteNow I want to know what the hair joke was...
ReplyDeleteThis cracked me up... and made me think of some of the dysfunction that pervades relationships.
ReplyDeleteOh, Hank, this sounded so sad and serious until the end, and then I laughed and laughed.
ReplyDeleteVery well done.
Thanks for the laugh.
K
I get the impression shes not too far away from you , Hank !
ReplyDeleteYes, you better say something nice about the hair or not..he..he....
ReplyDeleteEnjoyed the fun take on this prompt Hank ~
Haha... she's upset because you didn't like her new hairstyle. LOL
ReplyDeleteThis made me really chuckle!
will go to work with trepidation today...had my hair cut yesterday!!! haha..x
ReplyDeleteKeeping one's mouth shut sometimes is a good thing; unfortunately often one learns it after the fact.
ReplyDeleteYes, one should keep the mouth shut when it comes to hairstyles -- unless you love it. LOL
ReplyDeleteLoved the last lines! Sometimes it is wise to keep our opinion to ourselves!
ReplyDeleteAnna :o]
heehee
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This is funny yet emotions can be seen....so nice....
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