Picture Credit: Grandma's Goulash
Survival
Lonely child
Toiling till dusk
To help feed hungry siblings
Commonly a third world phenomena
To supplement meagre
Earnings of parents
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Grandma's Goulash MicroFiction with prompt
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Poetry Pantry #71
Such a terrible thing! Great write about a painful subject.
ReplyDeletesad reality check, well done.
ReplyDeleteGood post, highlighting a plight in the world.
ReplyDeletehelen-scribbles
Hello.
ReplyDeleteThis is a sad & all too real situation for many children.
Nicely penned, Hank.
Thanks for sharing & your visits/comments on my posts. Much appreciated.
Bashful Lady
Hank,
ReplyDeleteThe world is really oblivious to this exploitation, which is happening each day and night.
Sad pressure on such young shoulders.
Eileen
Those children are certainly more grateful for what they have than are most American children! Good one.
ReplyDeleteA sad but tragic reality...children working and toiling breaks my heart.
ReplyDeleteYou're so right, Hank, and most of us wouldn't see such a thing in this photo. "None so blind as those who will not see"!
ReplyDeleteThanks for opening our eyes.
Kay, Alberta, Canada
An Unfittie’s Guide to Adventurous Travel
Excellent, and so tragically true.
ReplyDeleteMadeleine Begun Kane
There's far too much poverty around the world. A disgrace.
ReplyDeleteYou have expressed simply something that cannot be expressed too simply too often. Well done.
ReplyDeleteYes it is sickening to think big companies use child labor for cheaper overhead costs.
ReplyDeleteman sad that this has to happen...and in many cases they are paid so meager...
ReplyDeleteGosh I see this now and then, in different forms and styles. The one around Angkor Wat is heartbreaking. (Madam, a necklace for a dollar? I want to go to school...please?)
ReplyDeleteThis is a very sad reality... Very touching poem Pareng Hank!
ReplyDeleteJJRod'z
It is so sad, indeed, that many children in today's world must carry way too, too much on their shoulders. A prayer goes up from my heart to them all as I put the period on this sentence.
ReplyDeletepowerful and short.
ReplyDeletewell done.
bless all kids.