Process Notes: This is a real-life situation posted earlier
in prose form. I had it truncated and revamped as a texting drama.
Image1: Baby Naqip the subject of this drama held
by Daddy Hafidz. Taken Jul 31,2011 at one year old
Attribution: Hank
Image2: Elder brother Nabil and sister Sarah
Ayesha taken on the same day.
Friday July 02, 2010 had been expected
to be just an ordinary day. It all started
in the morning when Norman and Kimie
(read: grandchildren) had their ‘Report Card’ day
Azlin, my eldest daughter
had dutifully accompanied her 2 boys
to confer with their respective teachers .
Parents were required to present themselves
for a one-to-one with the teachers
to gauge and discuss on
how they (the 2 boys) had
fared during the term.
It was all well and good
I was supposed to pick them up later
in mid-morning as there would not
be any more classes for the rest of the day.
Then it happened!
My loving wife, Shadah
received a text message from
Hafidz, my elder son
Hafidz, my elder son
'Qhaty’s in labour! '
What?.. Now? …Gosh!
We knew Qhaty was in the family way
and it was ‘anytime now’ and it
was expected.
was expected.
But not now! ....
It was still a surprise though
that it should be that morning.
Ok, ok, Shadah decided.
(in this sort of situations,
I would let her decide)
I would let her decide)
We’ll pick up Norman and Kimie
and then we'll go.
and then we'll go.
Hopefully we'll be in time.
From PJ, to Ampang Puteri Hospital ,
taking the DUKE highway would be a breeze.
Then another text, ‘ 7cm now. Baby otw’
To tell you the truth, I was not at all
knowledgeable nor familiar nor accustomed
to such technicalities.
knowledgeable nor familiar nor accustomed
to such technicalities.
But I could guess. It must be pretty soon.
Sure enough, before we could recover,
another text came,
'Baby boy safely arrivd naturally 2.96kg, 52cm.
Mommy is doin fine. Happy and grateful!. Alhmdlh.’
Mommy is doin fine. Happy and grateful!. Alhmdlh.’
We were relieved!. We were just
relieved. With a tinge of regret though
relieved. With a tinge of regret though
as we were not there when it happened.
Then another message . ‘It’s a boy! ‘
Maybe Hafidz was just as relieved
as us that he just couldn’t resist
as us that he just couldn’t resist
sending the confirmation again
or maybe he was just overwhelmed
with joy ‘
with joy ‘
Come to think of it.
If there's none of the ubiquitous
hand phones and the corresponding
sms texting culture ,
hand phones and the corresponding
sms texting culture ,
as what we are having now,
life would have been pretty
much mundane and uninteresting!
much mundane and uninteresting!
What a drama, an exciting one. Certainly a call and response. Congratulations to the parents and grandparents. Boys are fun.
ReplyDeletehaha yes it might be...or maybe would just find out in time like we used to and it would not be boring, just different...but it is cool to share in the excitement while it is happening...nice little bit of human drama in the techno age...
ReplyDeleteLife wasn't so mundane and uninteresting before, Hank. It was just different. LOL
ReplyDeleteBeautiful children!
Kay, Alberta, Canada
An Unfittie’s Guide to Adventurous Travel
What a lovely drama - texting can add to life's moments :)
ReplyDeleteOh yes you know my texting ways, from all my acronym plays. Can be quite interesting to get through as well, made for a great post though.
ReplyDeletesmiles...almost a live experience..think it's def. nice nowadays...on the other hand, maybe it was more intimate before...maybe both has its pro's and con's
ReplyDeleteMost enjoyable to read and so cleverly written
ReplyDeleteHave a good day Hank.
Yvonne.
I prefer this to the previous post. It's tighter and more dramatic.
ReplyDeleteAwesome. Congratulations to the parents and grandparents. :)Enjoy!
ReplyDeletetechno conversation...call & response....childbirth. what a scenario, good poem w/drama and suspense. well...what really is the telephone? has techno talking txt & sms pushed the common telephone into an adjancency ? i.e., another step into becoming cyborg? what media w/push txt & sms out of the way as the stranger?
ReplyDeletevery good poem Hank.
What a fun take on the prompt!
ReplyDeletehappy news... thanks for sharing this
ReplyDeletehappy sunday ~
Such lovely happy pictures and words to gladden anyone's heart.
ReplyDeleteSuch an exciting time to be able to share by texting. Congrats to all and blessing of a happy life to the little one.
ReplyDeleteIf THIS doesn't fit thee prompt! My goodness! What a wonderful delivery...no pun intended. Thanks so much for sharing the delight, surprise, and celebration with us!
ReplyDeleteamazing one.
ReplyDeleteSp warm and engaging! Thank you.
ReplyDeleteMy goodness, thank you so much for sharing this! I adore the poem, and the news :)
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