Author: Sebastiandoe5
Image: New Construction
in the Neighbourhood (here)
the 11 of 12 given words:
sound violins, frets protest, broken keeping
bridge, strings, ruins, belly, brittle,
Of fun and laughter
Of sounds of good music
Of melodious violins
Gone were the feelings
Of wanting to be an adult
Gone were the backyard
That witnessed broken bones
Of tears of childhood experience
And the triumph of keeping
Boyhood strength that bridged
Gone were the houses
Close to your heart
Gone were the players of old
Replaced by new ones
Where the game is still the same
Gone were the feelings
Of wanting to be an adult
Of frets tumbles and trauma
To protest and do adult things
To protest and do adult things
And get rewarded
Gone were the backyard
That witnessed broken bones
Of tears of childhood experience
And the triumph of keeping
Boyhood strength that bridged
hidden talents
Gone were the neighborhood
Whose kids have grown
And flew to new nests
Whose kids have grown
And flew to new nests
Some with no strings attached
Gone were the houses
Close to your heart
Now in ruins
To make way for developers
To enrich their belly
But we still witness
The antics of those vying
For higher office where
To make way for developers
To enrich their belly
But we still witness
The antics of those vying
For higher office where
brittle rivalries were rampant
Gone were the players of old
Replaced by new ones
Where the game is still the same
Only the players have changed
Bjorn at d'Verse Meet the Bar
with chant poetry
MMT's at the Whirligig Wordle #327
This game seems to continue from generation to generation. I hope it ends soon!
ReplyDeleteAny game that is defined by declaring a winner will result in too many losers... and that is costly.
ReplyDeleteThe list of "gones" is painfully long. A very clever write.
ReplyDeleteThe chant of 'gone' works beautifully in your poem, Hank.
ReplyDeleteThe more things change Hank, the more they remain the same. The players may change, but the uniform is still the same. Toss the uniform, leave thd game — there is that choice, though certainly not always simple. Break the trend, unlink the chain, divert the tide — we all need to endeavor to be the difference, to some degree.✊🏼 This was a powerful write my friend! 🙂
ReplyDeleteHank, when will this game finally end? There is nothing that exists that doesn't end, which puzzles me as to why this one is taking so long. We need to come full circle and get back to the garden.
ReplyDeleteI think of Cuba, Haiti,and other places where rights of the people are lost in government power games...
ReplyDeleteTo many games though the players change, the game sadly remains the same.
ReplyDeleteHow important it is to maintain the standards of ones life and not be bullied by others.
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