Image: Musical Dance
of a Water's Drop (here)
the given rhymes:
life wife strive knife rife
the given rhymes:
life wife strive knife rife
can you see it, a plop in still waters
a picture of a double bass player emerges
such is the beauty of nature's whispers
on the quiet but it transforms to pictures
not a stormy life rife with a loving wife
but strive for the best for the everlasting love
romantic moments not to cut off like a knife
but to pursue great times without a shove
Carrie's at the Sunday Muse #118
weejars at MLMM's Saturday's Mix - rhyme time
Carrie's at the Sunday Muse #118
weejars at MLMM's Saturday's Mix - rhyme time
Nature's whisper, this is so lovely Hank! You always multitask prompts so poetically!
ReplyDeleteThe first reaction I had ... a violin player performing while standing in a whirlpool .... the second a ghostly apparition throwing a huge frog into a pond.
ReplyDeleteI like your interpretation ....
Love the image of a barely controlled dance.
ReplyDeleteSuch beautiful words!
ReplyDeleteMust naturally happen. Well done!
ReplyDeleteNice one Hank. Happy Sunday
ReplyDeleteMuch💖love
Love the beauty of nature's whispers...You've got my imagination going!
ReplyDeleteWonderful poem on nature's whispers Hank.
ReplyDeleteYvonne.
"a picture of a double bass player emerges" - very cool.
ReplyDeleteI too like the double bass player. I an almost hear the beat.
ReplyDeleteStrive (for love) we must indeed!
ReplyDeletelove ‘nature’s whispers’, Hank.
ReplyDeleteNice rhyming, Hank. Do you think sometimes a gentle shove might be needed though?
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