Image A Moment in Time (here)
Stealing stealthily into a time long gone
Bending the memories against stalling often
It had been sensational in righting a wrong
Was it not the often quoted reality of the norm
Assessing on matters at hand to get some lead
Experience could be a good teacher for a bid
Why ineffective though in going for the kill
Not a moment too soon unmoving staying still
Looking back to moments of an unnerving error
Unwittingly discovered when referring to the side mirror
Not fair to expect rewards when much unskilled
When contributions were meagre much unfulfilled
Carrie's The Sunday Muse #116
Very cleverly written Hank, as a non driver myself I thought this most interesting.
ReplyDeleteYvonne.
For some reason, this just tripped the "Bond song" filter in my head. As in, this would be an awesome intro to a movie. :)
ReplyDeleteHind sight is 20/20 as they say. Love this Hank! That first line really drew me right through! Wonderful writing!!
ReplyDeleteYou went with rhymes, nice.
ReplyDeleteThe past makes us smart too late. It is twenty-twenty.
ReplyDelete"Stealing stealthily into a time long gone" great opening line.
ReplyDeleteClever poem, Hank!
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