Tuesday, July 4, 2017

munching session to begin

                                                                                 Author : Sippakorn Yamkasikorn
Image: Ready to Eat Pasta! (here)

plateful of pasta
munching session to begin
but tummy is full

wanting to run wild
too bad it hurts his parents
mischief on his mind

Note: This is the first tryout of the
"fragment and phrase" way of writing  a haiku
(hope it works)

Chev's Carpe Diem - 1214 dawn
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6 comments:

  1. nashvillecats2July 4, 2017 at 9:52 PM

    I thought it was Great Hank.

    Yvonne.

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  2. Alex J. CavanaughJuly 5, 2017 at 5:51 AM

    Sounds like he is too full of himself.

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  3. Pat HattJuly 5, 2017 at 6:25 AM

    Mischief can be a little fun haha

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  4. AnonymousJuly 5, 2017 at 3:55 PM

    Work for me.

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  5. ChèvrefeuilleJuly 5, 2017 at 5:59 PM

    Sure a great way of using the fragment and phrase, in both haiku the fragment and phrase are well done.

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  6. lynn__July 6, 2017 at 8:14 PM

    Nice...but you're making me hungry!

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