Friday, February 10, 2017

He stuck to his guns

                                                                                            Attribution: Jane Long 
Image: Look Ma, no hands! (here)
(a show-stealer meant for bigger things)

11 given phrases:
pink thistle, cane fields, self-propelled , business districts
Black Oyster Bar, satchel of notebooks, salt domes
ghost-dancing,  cinder and salt deposits
honky-tonk (bar that provides country music)
three persons in one (Holy Trinity)

He stuck to his guns
Would have loved the colorful pink thistle clumps
But ended up in the expanse of drab cane fields
Very much like wanting to be a self propelled
professional in a business district but found
himself thrown into the Black Oyster Bar
a honky-tonk outfit belting out not just
Randy Travis numbers but even
three persons in one gospel music

With a satchel of notebooks
that jutted up like a salt dome
Ghost-dancing like a skilled Indian brave of old
It was no cinder and deposits sort of movements
but trappings of ballroom dancing
cool and collected

This was no mean feat
Mastered through years of dedication
A refined show-stealer!

Stacy's Word List Wednesdays #10
Bekkie's Saturday's Image Write #2
Mary's at PU's Poetry Pantry #340

20 comments:

  1. Sure takes skill and the want to get better to be able to get to such a point.

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  2. With tenacity one can achieve most things.
    Great write and read Hank.

    Yvonne.

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  3. "This was no mean feat"
    Mastering words to epic poem
    A refined imagination!

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  4. "Mastered through years of dedication" key to all perfection and refinement...

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  5. dedication... possibly the key to success.

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  6. This was no mean feat
    Mastered through years of dedication
    A refined show-stealer!


    Excellent write, Hank!❤️

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  7. As long as he found his place and could show off his stuff.

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  8. It always takes dedication to master anything... listened to a talkshow on the radio about grit and how much it means for success vs talent.

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  9. That was good Hank! Combining 3 writes into one, bravo! I loved your inserted words, haven't done one of those in some time. Thanks for writing! Hugs!

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  10. Hank I don't know how you do it, but you are able to weave amazing stories from the prompts.

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  11. Great jumping off point for that first line. What a tumble!

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  12. That's quite the image.....and quite a feat how you combined so many prompts!

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  13. Masterful use of the given prompt words. Dedication equals skill! Thank you for sharing.

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  14. Years of dedication -- in other words, practice makes perfect?

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  15. This was no mean feat
    Mastered through years of dedication
    A refined show-stealer!......... like this piece, Hank.

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  16. That old maxim: where there is a will - there is a way ... is very wise. You constructed this piece beautifully, and it is a pleasure to read.

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  17. This was a very nicely detailed piece. The pacing and playful use of the required words gave this a sort of frenetic feel, which suited the theme of hard work coming before the display of skill.

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  18. Nice ending. I'm glad it turned out well as "A refined show-stealer".

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  19. This entertaining poem is no mean feat either!

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