Attribution: Jane Long
Image: Look Ma, no hands! (here)
(a show-stealer meant for bigger things)
11 given phrases:
pink thistle, cane fields, self-propelled , business districts
Black Oyster Bar, satchel of notebooks, salt domes
ghost-dancing, cinder and salt deposits
honky-tonk (bar that provides country music)
three persons in one (Holy Trinity)
He stuck to his guns
Would have loved the colorful pink thistle clumps
But ended up in the expanse of drab cane fields
Very much like wanting to be a self propelled
professional in a business district but found
himself thrown into the Black Oyster Bar
a honky-tonk outfit belting out not just
Randy Travis numbers but even
three persons in one gospel music
With a satchel of notebooks
that jutted up like a salt dome
Ghost-dancing like a skilled Indian brave of old
It was no cinder and deposits sort of movements
but trappings of ballroom dancing
cool and collected
This was no mean feat
Mastered through years of dedication
A refined show-stealer!
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Sure takes skill and the want to get better to be able to get to such a point.
ReplyDeleteWith tenacity one can achieve most things.
ReplyDeleteGreat write and read Hank.
Yvonne.
"This was no mean feat"
ReplyDeleteMastering words to epic poem
A refined imagination!
"Mastered through years of dedication" key to all perfection and refinement...
ReplyDeletededication... possibly the key to success.
ReplyDeleteThis was no mean feat
ReplyDeleteMastered through years of dedication
A refined show-stealer!
Excellent write, Hank!❤️
As long as he found his place and could show off his stuff.
ReplyDeleteIt always takes dedication to master anything... listened to a talkshow on the radio about grit and how much it means for success vs talent.
ReplyDeleteThat was good Hank! Combining 3 writes into one, bravo! I loved your inserted words, haven't done one of those in some time. Thanks for writing! Hugs!
ReplyDeleteHank I don't know how you do it, but you are able to weave amazing stories from the prompts.
ReplyDeleteGreat jumping off point for that first line. What a tumble!
ReplyDeleteThat's quite the image.....and quite a feat how you combined so many prompts!
ReplyDeleteMasterful use of the given prompt words. Dedication equals skill! Thank you for sharing.
ReplyDeleteYears of dedication -- in other words, practice makes perfect?
ReplyDeleteThis was no mean feat
ReplyDeleteMastered through years of dedication
A refined show-stealer!......... like this piece, Hank.
That old maxim: where there is a will - there is a way ... is very wise. You constructed this piece beautifully, and it is a pleasure to read.
ReplyDeleteThis was a very nicely detailed piece. The pacing and playful use of the required words gave this a sort of frenetic feel, which suited the theme of hard work coming before the display of skill.
ReplyDeleteNice ending. I'm glad it turned out well as "A refined show-stealer".
ReplyDeleteThis entertaining poem is no mean feat either!
ReplyDeleteRandy Travis!
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