Thursday, December 8, 2011

Warmness

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Devoid of malice
Absence invokes warm feelings
Sentiments declared

Fond feelings relent
Courting positive response
From someone so dear

Submitted for Sensational Haiku Wednesday with prompt 'malice'
and Meeting the Bar at d"Verse - Writing Emotions
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25 comments:

  1. Dave KingDecember 8, 2011 at 3:55 AM

    I like these very much. Your best so far, I think.

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  2. Brian MillerDecember 8, 2011 at 3:55 AM

    absence makes the heart grow fonder? ha i see it in there but...glad the sentiments were shared and a positive response gained...

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  3. kaykualaDecember 8, 2011 at 4:12 AM

    Dave - Thanks, but I thought it's just ordinary.

    Brian - Malice connotes negativity. But I see without malice as a virtue and it courts a positive response.

    Hank

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  4. Pat HattDecember 8, 2011 at 5:26 AM

    As we long
    Think all is so wrong
    When the long does cease
    We're as happy as a ummm flock of geese

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  5. kaykualaDecember 8, 2011 at 5:49 AM

    Pat,
    As we jog merrily along
    With a little sing-song
    or the rhythmic Mr Hatt
    Loneliness departs

    Hank

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  6. AnonymousDecember 8, 2011 at 8:44 AM

    Love the positive take on Malice ... (once of my least favorite words). Well done! Happy Thursday!!

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  7. JJ Roa RodriguezDecember 8, 2011 at 2:36 PM

    wonderful Pareng Hank!

    Pareng JJ

    ps.... off to New York tomorrow at 8am Toronto time. I'll take your advise. But if cannot be, then there is a reason to come back...

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  8. kaykualaDecember 8, 2011 at 3:24 PM

    Beccagivens - Right on Ma'am and thanks!

    ParengJJ - enjoy yourself buddy!


    Hank

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  9. MaryDecember 8, 2011 at 5:50 PM

    These are great. Kudos to you for a terrific write.

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  10. ScarletDecember 8, 2011 at 5:55 PM

    Enjoyed the positive spin on this ~

    Happy day ~

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  11. Brian MillerDecember 8, 2011 at 7:00 PM

    was wondering if i would see this at dverse tonight...smiles.

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  12. kaykualaDecember 8, 2011 at 7:47 PM

    Mary - Thanks ,plain and ordinary really.

    Heaven - Thanks, thought better that way.

    Brian - That's right! Very conveniently relevant. Thanks for 2nd visit (wonder where you get all the energy, Sir!)


    Hank

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  13. AnonymousDecember 8, 2011 at 8:04 PM

    Hank, I admire the ability to say a lot in few words. If only all could be devoid of malice.

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  14. RHYTHM AND RHYMEDecember 9, 2011 at 1:15 AM

    Wonderful read Hank.

    Yvonne.

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  15. Dave KingDecember 9, 2011 at 3:05 AM

    I like this very much. I think it may be one of your best.

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  16. Jyoti MishraDecember 9, 2011 at 7:14 AM

    Awesome lines Hank...
    as always u expressed lot many things, in just few words !!!

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  17. Judith WesterfieldDecember 9, 2011 at 10:03 AM

    "Fond feelings relent" I love that line.

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  18. kaykualaDecember 9, 2011 at 3:49 PM

    Thank you All,
    Victoria,Yvonne,Dave(2nd time around),Jyoti and Judith.

    Hank

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  19. AnonymousDecember 9, 2011 at 4:19 PM

    It's always the "someone so dear" that makes it scary.

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  20. kaykualaDecember 9, 2011 at 4:30 PM

    Alice,
    Very true! It may take any direction, may be hurting!

    Hank

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  21. Myrna R.December 9, 2011 at 8:21 PM

    This felt so gentle and rather romantic. I really enjoyed reading.

    Thanks for stopping by my blog. I must make it a point to visit yours more often.

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  22. flaubertDecember 10, 2011 at 1:47 PM

    Hank, how very beautiful, and so well said.

    Pamela

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  23. kaykualaDecember 10, 2011 at 2:57 PM

    Myrna - Thanks Ma'am, Please do!

    Pam - Thanks to you!


    Hank

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  24. Maxwell Mead Williams Robinson BarryDecember 10, 2011 at 4:36 PM

    this one is very unique AND remarkable.

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  25. AnonymousDecember 14, 2011 at 3:05 AM

    A very positive set for such a dark word. Bravo!

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