that was very deep.. it took 2 times read to understand that :) Fantastic read !!
Jyoti - Thanks, wondering where it took me too!Hank
ummmmmm, choices.... can't help but to ask my love, my keeper??!!
Hmmm what about me indeed. Could be left to a suffering fate or maybe he's just the bait.
i think you better hope you can hold your breath...ha...there is danger in putting down roots too deep...?
Really interesting take on the prompt, the whole tide thing slipped my mind entirely.
Lovely haiku!Madeleine Begun Kane
Very profound Hank but good to read.Yvonne.
wonderful and very deep...its one of your bests for sure..Fantastic post..!!!
pieceofpie - someone dear would come to the rescue?Pat - Could be an untimely fate But too luxurious a bait!Brian - He wouldn't last but sure learnt a lesson not to be too deep rooted!SR Mike - Didn't see it initially but felt about it!Madeleine,Yvonne and Madhu - Thanks to you all!Hank
Different, imaginative way of looking at the prompt...
Clever!
very thought provoking. Love the picture prompt too. Rather Salvador Dali!
Powerful and unique take on the prompt, Hank...
What indeed. Great depth to this.
You wove magic haiku this week! Not venturing out of one's domain must be like living in a make-believe world.
It's best to not get too attached.
Lovely thoughts responding to this prompt. "What about me?" felt sad, an abandoned feeling. This had a great emotional aspect to it. Nice job.
Ooh, interesting perspective. Well done.
Indeed, sometimes we should be happy with what we have and count our blessings eh! Great use of the prompt!
he's not so safe, is he?
that was very deep..
ReplyDeleteit took 2 times read to understand that :)
Fantastic read !!
Jyoti - Thanks, wondering where it took me too!
ReplyDeleteHank
ummmmmm, choices.... can't help but to ask my love, my keeper??!!
ReplyDeleteHmmm what about me indeed. Could be left to a suffering fate or maybe he's just the bait.
ReplyDeletei think you better hope you can hold your breath...ha...there is danger in putting down roots too deep...?
ReplyDeleteReally interesting take on the prompt, the whole tide thing slipped my mind entirely.
ReplyDeleteLovely haiku!
ReplyDeleteMadeleine Begun Kane
Very profound Hank but good to read.
ReplyDeleteYvonne.
wonderful and very deep...
ReplyDeleteits one of your bests for sure..
Fantastic post..!!!
pieceofpie - someone dear would come to the rescue?
ReplyDeletePat - Could be an untimely fate
But too luxurious a bait!
Brian - He wouldn't last but sure learnt a lesson not to be too deep rooted!
SR Mike - Didn't see it initially but felt about it!
Madeleine,Yvonne and Madhu - Thanks to you all!
Hank
Different, imaginative way of looking at the prompt...
ReplyDeleteClever!
ReplyDeletevery thought provoking. Love the picture prompt too. Rather Salvador Dali!
ReplyDeletePowerful and unique take on the prompt, Hank...
ReplyDeleteWhat indeed. Great depth to this.
ReplyDeleteYou wove magic haiku this week! Not venturing out of one's domain must be like living in a
ReplyDeletemake-believe world.
It's best to not get too attached.
ReplyDeleteLovely thoughts responding to this prompt. "What about me?" felt sad, an abandoned feeling. This had a great emotional aspect to it. Nice job.
ReplyDeleteOoh, interesting perspective. Well done.
ReplyDeleteIndeed, sometimes we should be happy with what we have and count our blessings eh!
ReplyDeleteGreat use of the prompt!
he's not so safe, is he?
ReplyDelete