Image: Packs a Punch (here)
given out to lots of fun
for as long as she wants
in streets of bravado
where bravery is a curse
where feeligs are bandied about
loosely with lots of shouts
such is the blessing accorded
do beware all the heavy-set louts
here is a fighter standing proud
young as she is
often thinking out loud
never a moment too soon to shoot
a young heart set in different moulds
delicate hands flailing
not bound for wailimgs
but packs a punch
a finality,
not without a victory dance
and musing, 'I have won'
Grace at d'Verse's OLN #226
Most thought provoking Hank. Well done.
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Have to push sometimes if you want to win
ReplyDeleteNice phrasing: "packs a punch
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She packs quite a punch Hank! Have a good weekend.
ReplyDelete“Feelings bandied about loosely...”. You describe a place and link it to a person, causation? Correlation? Answering seems like a judgment, but in any event too bad we have to fight instead of lift each other, a lot to think bout here, vivid setting.
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