Very nice tanka Hank ... I like the deeper spiritual layer.
And on and on it goes through the ages
Like the deep approach in your tanka.
Well composed tanka. (the depth of it is left to us)
I like the way you have expanded on the phrase 'the sins of the father', Hank.
I like your choice of image, fitting the theme well especially when accompanied by your tanka. Your use of a question in the second line feels creative and effective. Janice (Ontheland)
"Sins of the father", interesting, this phrase has been rattling around my head lately...oh, how it stings. Nice work.
Both poem and image are excellent, Hank!
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Very nice tanka Hank ... I like the deeper spiritual layer.
ReplyDeleteAnd on and on it goes through the ages
ReplyDeleteLike the deep approach in your tanka.
ReplyDeleteWell composed tanka. (the depth of it is left to us)
ReplyDeleteI like the way you have expanded on the phrase 'the sins of the father', Hank.
ReplyDeleteI like your choice of image, fitting the theme well especially when accompanied by your tanka. Your use of a question in the second line feels creative and effective. Janice (Ontheland)
ReplyDelete"Sins of the father", interesting, this phrase has been rattling around my head lately...oh, how it stings. Nice work.
ReplyDeleteBoth poem and image are excellent, Hank!
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