Monday, April 20, 2015

Reflections in Innocence

Image: Courtesy of Tess' Mag #266

 R for Reflections in Innocence

The given words:
never mind gorgeous emit smother pelvis bounce incessant pillow intern heroine
sublimation  (the diversion of the energy of a sexual or other biological impulse from its immediate goal to one of a more acceptable nature or use.)
syzygy (any two related things, either alike or opposite)


Never mind if you think I'm gorgeous
I am not emitting any kind of sexual power
to smother your innocence though
my pelvis keeps bouncing incessantly

I don't even have a pillow
to provide the warmth

I am an intern wanting to be a
heroine that is sublimation 
at its most enduring

Can we get a syzygy syzygy
kind of compromise?

For MLMM's hosting at Wordle # 57
Tess' hosting at Mag Tales #266
Kerry's at Tuesday's Platform at Real Toads
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21 comments:

  1. UnknownApril 21, 2015 at 4:47 AM

    Nice write.

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  2. colleenApril 21, 2015 at 6:02 AM

    Amazing how you tamed those words into a poem like that.

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  3. Sanaa RizviApril 21, 2015 at 7:41 AM

    Intriguing...!

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  4. Vandana SharmaApril 21, 2015 at 8:38 AM

    very different words used here, amazing!

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  5. 21 WitsApril 21, 2015 at 9:13 AM

    Yes we can, our photo will prove it. I'm all for a syzygy kind of way! I like this 6 letter word with three y's and 3 consonants!

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  6. Kerry O'ConnorApril 21, 2015 at 9:33 AM

    Those words certainly make for a romping poem, Hank!

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  7. Magaly GuerreroApril 21, 2015 at 9:43 AM

    The last line of the first stanza filled my mind with every bit of twerking my eyes have ever been assaulted with!

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  8. Sherry Blue SkyApril 21, 2015 at 9:54 AM

    You whipped those words into subservience, Hank! LOL.

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  9. Alex J. CavanaughApril 21, 2015 at 10:41 AM

    That was suggestive!

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  10. BerowneApril 21, 2015 at 11:16 AM

    Very adroitly posted; clever and well written.

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  11. brudbergApril 21, 2015 at 1:34 PM

    I would try to say you challenged yourself weaving the poem from those words..

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  12. Rosemary Nissen-WadeApril 21, 2015 at 3:39 PM

    Oh, very clever! :)

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  13. Gillena CoxApril 21, 2015 at 7:56 PM

    Interesting luv that whimsical question
    Much love...

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  14. grapelingApril 22, 2015 at 12:34 AM

    that word list would have me throw up my hands, but you crafted them well ~

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  15. Pat HattApril 22, 2015 at 10:25 AM

    Hmmm were the thought zig zag with that one haha

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  16. HannahApril 22, 2015 at 5:24 PM

    This feels like a smaller part of a larger whole...intriguing, Hank. Thank you for visiting me. :)

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  17. Maria MaineroApril 22, 2015 at 9:49 PM

    You brought a lot together very effectively and I like the end result.

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  18. HelenaApril 23, 2015 at 12:24 PM

    I'm amazed at the incorporation of words to the finished work. Even more so, when like you, you're able to take on two at a time! Bravo!

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  19. Tess KincaidApril 25, 2015 at 11:22 AM

    Thanks Hank...

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  20. AnonymousApril 26, 2015 at 4:35 PM

    oh ...amazing!

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  21. UnknownApril 27, 2015 at 7:07 AM

    wowza!!!
    Oh thats W
    Ravishing

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