Saturday, February 21, 2015

Gateway to Heaven

                                                                               Attribution: Diego Delso (CC-BY-SA)
Image: Balcón del Mediterráneo, Benidorm, Spain (here)

A Shadorma
A non-rhyming form of 3-5-3-3-7-5 syllables

Balcony
or viewing platform
glimse of wealth
faraway
opens opportunities
to those who are brave

A Fibonacci
with syllable count of 1, 1, 2, 3, 5, 8, 13…

Steps
kind
dainty
friendly ones
Gateway to Heaven
Care to seek forgiveness before
doors closed for born-again sinners seeking redemption?

For Georgia's hosting at MLMM BJ's
Shadorma and Beyond - fibonacci
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7 comments:

  1. The CrankyFebruary 21, 2015 at 4:31 PM

    Interesting forms, I'll have to try my hand at them!

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  2. Brian MillerFebruary 21, 2015 at 4:42 PM

    ha. i will def ask forgiveness first, please...smiles.

    depends on what the wealth is....is that a submarine out there in the water?

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    1. kaykualaFebruary 21, 2015 at 4:58 PM

      Could not make out Brian! There are no other descriptions on the pic.

      Hank

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  3. Pat HattFebruary 21, 2015 at 4:57 PM

    Wealth and health I'd go for. As for sinning, it depends lol

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  4. UnknownFebruary 21, 2015 at 9:42 PM

    Oh dear I have until Easter to do "mes Pâques" and ask for forgiveness.

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  5. nashvillecats2February 22, 2015 at 12:42 AM

    So interesting and what a beautiful picture?

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  6. Alex J. CavanaughFebruary 22, 2015 at 5:44 AM

    Very nice! Hope those doors don't close though.

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