Saturday, December 20, 2014

Great mood for all concerned - an Essence

                                                                                               Attribution: Erik Cavarra
Image: Perfection even in training (here)

Essence:
Essence, created by Emily Romano consists of two
lines of six syllables each.  There is an end rhyme
(rhyme at the end of the line) and an internal rhyme
(rhyme in the middle of the line)  -  mlmm

Golfer's Desire

Golfers pray all the time
Good play when weather’s fine


Yuletide cheer

Santa gave good presents
Great mood for all concerned

 For Georgia's BJ's Shadorma and beyond  -  essence 
at Mindlovemisery's Menagerie  (mlmm)



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7 comments:

  1. Pat HattDecember 20, 2014 at 4:48 AM

    Good presents are great and a hole in one is fine too I bet

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  2. Holy Ghost WriterDecember 20, 2014 at 5:32 AM

    Can't beat a good swing

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  3. Debi SwimDecember 20, 2014 at 6:59 AM

    Pray and curse, I think. But, you've made a hole in one on the essence.

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  4. Alex J. CavanaughDecember 20, 2014 at 3:35 PM

    I think Debi is right!

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  5. UnknownDecember 20, 2014 at 5:58 PM

    I love them both...I think you could even add for the golfer they play even in bad weather:)

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  6. AnonymousDecember 20, 2014 at 9:09 PM

    Really had to smile at the golfer -- nicely done! :)

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  7. AnonymousDecember 21, 2014 at 1:02 AM

    Loved this Hank. great read.

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