Tuesday, December 9, 2014

Floating snow flakes

                                                                                               Attribution: Serge Melki
Image: Falling snow (here)

Inspiration from Robert 
Frost's short poems
Downward spiral
Floating snow flakes
Felt smoothness with
enhanced whiteness
of surroundings

Little creatures
Hidden from view
Hibernation
Now in progress

Man rightly seen
Preparing for
grand Yuletide cheer


Inspired by Richard 
Wright's  haiku
                                                           the morning after
abundance of snow last night
coolness in the air

on clapping my hands
on a cold Winter’s morning
blood surged to my head

light sense of freedom
white fluffy snows on branches
                                                         pureness strongly felt                                                         

For Chev's CARPE DIEM GW #37 
Georgia's on Frost
and Special #21 on Richard Wright
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7 comments:

  1. Pat HattDecember 9, 2014 at 8:11 AM

    I agree with the little creatures, hibernation is due

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  2. Vandana SharmaDecember 9, 2014 at 9:04 AM

    Wow!! this is the best creation of yours , I mean others are also very very good but this is excellent, my favourite

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  3. AnonymousDecember 9, 2014 at 9:58 AM

    Hibernation would be due for me also but am still looking for an apartment.,
    Bitter wind here. Great verse.

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  4. Alex J. CavanaughDecember 9, 2014 at 11:29 AM

    Very peaceful! I can almost hear the snow falling.

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  5. Holy Ghost WriterDecember 9, 2014 at 3:26 PM

    It is a peaceful sight

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  6. Brian MillerDecember 9, 2014 at 6:04 PM

    it is so refreshing when it snows...
    i hope we get some good snow this winter....

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  7. 21 WitsDecember 9, 2014 at 7:29 PM

    Yes, one has to do what one must to make it through...although your words hit home, for some reason, (very surprising because winter came early this year) but so far I'm rather enjoying it all!

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