arise from the spirit’s stalks
chill my autumn heart Panchali's
For my loved one from
afar
Pining for love’s memories Hank's
mystic purple flames
arise from the spirit’s stalks
chill my autumn heart Panchali's
Chirpings above tells me
The lonely heart yonder hurts Hank's
Note: To complete Panchali's 5-7-5
haiku with a 7-7 for a Tan Renga
For Chev's CARPE DIEM Tan Renga Challenge
#59 with Panchali's 'mystic purple flames'
Note: To complete Panchali's 5-7-5
haiku with a 7-7 for a Tan Renga
For Chev's CARPE DIEM Tan Renga Challenge
#59 with Panchali's 'mystic purple flames'
When loved one's are far, their memories warm our winter hearth.
ReplyDeleteWonderful verse Hank, lonely hearts are not good to have...I can relate to that, so one must think of good happy memories and smile.
ReplyDeletei like the second one more, thanks for your sharing Hank
ReplyDeletemuch love...
I like the first - love's memories.
ReplyDeletePining away and lonely won't get one anywhere, have to search out.
ReplyDeletePining for love's memories -- such aching
ReplyDeleteLovely --
such yearning ... lovely continuations ...
ReplyDeletePining love memories, though painful, are still sweet,Hank.
ReplyDeleteHank, both are beautiful..my favorite line Pining love memories..
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