Attribution: Shoulder-synth
Contending seeds of talents
Lingering music
Unfurled levels of honor
Nurturing of growth revealed
Moved within balance
of melodious softness
Greater show of force
Moving forward unperturbed
To a position of strength
Note: A Tanka with 2 stanzas of
a 5-7-5-7-7 syllable pattern
For Chev's CARPE DIEM Special #95 - one is to
write a tanka inspired by the instrumental - Falls of Glory
a composition of Portuguese composer Brunuhville
Note: A Tanka with 2 stanzas of
a 5-7-5-7-7 syllable pattern
For Chev's CARPE DIEM Special #95 - one is to
write a tanka inspired by the instrumental - Falls of Glory
a composition of Portuguese composer Brunuhville
Your words come to a great crescendo, Hank. I love the ending with 'a position of strength.'
ReplyDeleteglory is fleeting,
ReplyDeleteas is strength---neither will have your name
remembered as long as
your love
nice... i love listening to the church organ... praising him with all might...
ReplyDeleteThere is a great determination of life, i admire this very much
ReplyDeleteMuch love...
Let the melody soothe
ReplyDeleteBalance is key, as the tune harmonizes away
ReplyDeleteMelodia Unfurled!
ReplyDeleteALOHA from Honolulu
ComfortSpiral
=^..^=
Truly enjoyed this Tanka...the two last lines of each stanza show such inner growth of spirit and strength. Oliana
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