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Attribution: LaurMG
The joy of having
someone dear to share joy and
sorrow was profound
A shoulder to cry
on. A pillar of strength that
extended support
But it came down with
a crash. Not expected to
be wretchedly dumped
Strong foundations just
floundered. Betrayal thumbed one
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I always love your way of expression through words, you have written it so aptly.
ReplyDeleteLoved this cascade of haiku.
so true on having someone to lean on, a betrayal by them though or one you thought you could trust is devastating...surely....
ReplyDeleteOh wow excellent work =) The haiku was just perfect and they flowed beautiful
ReplyDeleteWonderfully expressed
ReplyDeleteThese things happen. Hopefully not too often.Life is filled with unexpected cruelty.
ReplyDeleteYeah once trust goes all that is left is woes.
ReplyDeleteYes it is hard and it hurts. Brilliant set of haiku x
ReplyDeleteSo sad to be betrayed by someone whom you leaned on and trusted. Betrayal
ReplyDeleteIf betrayal can flow you "flowed" it!
ReplyDeleteWell written...thank you for sharing.☺
ReplyDeletePeace
Siggi
Hi kaykaula. This is avery touching Haiku.Each word soaked in emotion.
ReplyDeletethe true face of betrayal is always most profound when you have had a happy time... we all have been there done that. Lovely read :)
ReplyDeleteRicha
So true Hank!! What a terrible cheated feeling!! You have expressed it precisely!! When the base rattles you are shattered!!
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