Photo by TheFoxandTheRaven
Image: Courtesy of Tess' Mag
Young hearts of innocence
Little things mean a lot
Taking them all at face value
That words sweetly
uttered
Bound feelings of love
But he left…
Not without reasons
But just
But why?
Tolerance spread thin
It’s a disappointment!
Left in the lurch
Strings unattached
All alone in this cruel world
Cared less and abandoned
Why must she be made to suffer
Her heart shattered into a million pieces
Left in the cold
Drenched to the skin
No, mankind hadn’t been hurting
Humankind wasn’t at fault
It’s about him and him alone
I’m young
I’m pretty
I’m strong!
Faith in a good man
Hadn’t waned
It’s a blessing
I’m now better prepared
My tears shed but I’ve learnt
life is a journey with lessons along the way.
ReplyDeleteVery well written.
All alone in this cruel world
ReplyDeleteCared less and abandoned
Why must she be made to suffer
Her heart shattered into a million pieces
Left in the cold
Drenched to the skin...real emotions in that...
and i think at some point we all learn these things...i am glad that in the end she feels encouraged....smiles.
The perfect one is always there !!!
ReplyDeleteNearly everyone has asked these same questions and held these feelings of loss.
ReplyDeleteHi, Hank~ It is heartbreaking to lose someone you love, but there are more fish in the say like they say.
ReplyDeleteYep, life is quite the journey. Nice one.
ReplyDeleteGood, true feelings, with an optimistic result! thanks-
ReplyDeleteSuch a fate many have to be alone, but journey away and could see a brighter day, have to keep on at it.
ReplyDeleteThis is a really moving piece..I can feel the emotions..
ReplyDeleteThis one is so powerful and motivating, wow, amazing!
ReplyDeleteI sense he's gone for just a wee bit- ! Nice write!
ReplyDelete'I'll overcome!' Oh yes! Love that this does not have to get the better of her...she is indeed strong.
ReplyDeleteAn interesting and vigorous response to the prompt.
ReplyDeletedespite all she was hopeful at the end..
ReplyDeletethat was the best way to conclude Hank..
enjoyed it..lovely expressions as ever
A good example of triumph over adversity.
ReplyDeleteNo doubt about it..this is absolutely true...and we keep growing...
ReplyDeletegreat journey....well done and thanks for sharing
ReplyDeleteSuch a rite of passage , this one , thanks Hank
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