Thursday, February 2, 2012

Yes!


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We're all caged we’re  dazed
Yes! Got no place

Thoughts engaged just debased
Yes! What a blaze

We're muzzled I'm puzzled
Yes! For this tussle

Leave us alone begs no bones
Yes! I’m just stoned

Merrily sedated just fated
Yes! Thoughts outdated

That’s the least, blessed to forgive
Yes! Now at peace

Smile a little the least possible
Yes! Seeks no trouble

Fate is sealed there’s no appeal
Yes! Must you squeal ?

With such relish not squeamish
Yes! Yes! Yes! A strange finish! 

Inspired by Thursday Think Tank #83 with prompt 'Yes'
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15 comments:

  1. Pat HattFebruary 2, 2012 at 10:03 AM

    This one was just fun to read
    As it sent the rhyming senses tingling indeed
    But when the answer is always Yes,
    Things may end up a mess.

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    1. kaykualaFebruary 2, 2012 at 6:09 PM

      Absolutely, Pat
      Say yes,you'll be had
      Sanely forgiving
      Is the thing!

      Hank

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  2. Brian MillerFebruary 2, 2012 at 10:20 AM

    hank this is a great verse...fun to read, some nice embedded messages and wisdom as well...yes! smiles.

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  3. JJ Roa RodriguezFebruary 2, 2012 at 11:05 AM

    Wonderful post again...

    JJRod'z

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  4. Myrna R.February 2, 2012 at 11:06 AM

    I enjoyed reading this. It was whimsical, yet full of wise messages. Good write.

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  5. Kat MortensenFebruary 2, 2012 at 11:58 AM

    It is a little strange finish, but I like it nonetheless. Squeamish, me? Nah!

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  6. boogulooFebruary 2, 2012 at 2:54 PM

    You brought a smile to my face. Thanks.

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  7. ScarletFebruary 2, 2012 at 5:42 PM

    say YES all the time..ha..ha...~

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  8. kaykualaFebruary 2, 2012 at 6:13 PM

    ParengJJ,Myrna,Kat,Booguloo and Heaven,
    Thank you all for visiting!

    Hank

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  9. The PoetFebruary 2, 2012 at 10:18 PM

    Hello Hank.
    Some positive messages here.
    Thanks for sharing. Your visit is always appreciated too.
    Have a great weekend, my friend!

    Kingship Of Love

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  10. RHYTHM AND RHYMEFebruary 3, 2012 at 1:15 AM

    A splendid poem Hank and fun to read.

    Yvonne.

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  11. MaryFebruary 3, 2012 at 6:47 AM

    Very clever writing here, Hank.
    Each stanza has its own meaning. I like that.
    And yes, say YES.

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  12. EllaFebruary 3, 2012 at 11:34 AM

    Hank,
    Yours was so lyrical and fun to read!

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  13. madhumakhiFebruary 7, 2012 at 4:28 AM

    Funny word play. Great internal repetition of sounds.

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