Tuesday, April 11, 2023

daffodils with colours so bold,

                                                                                 Author: John O'Neill
Image: Yellow daffodils (here)

Yellowness, being all yellowness,
A shade that brings such happiness,
It's bright and warm, like the sun above,
And brings to bear a feeling of love.

Golden fields of wheat and grain,
Swaying gently in the summer rain,
Dandelions dancing in the breeze,
Yellow petals a sight to please.

The autumn leaves, so crisp and bright,
Their yellow hues a gorgeous sight,
As they fall gently to the ground,
A blanket of yellow all abound.

There's daffodils with colours so bold,
A sight to cherish, a story to be told,
It brings us joy, it brings us light,
A hue so pure, so warm, so bright

Sarah at d'Verse : everything-yellow/

6 comments:

  1. Such a sweet poem, I really loved that line with Summer Rain.

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  2. Very nice use of a rhyme scheme. I'm always impressed when there's no straining, it just feels very natural. And yellow! Yes!

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  3. I like the rhymes and rhythm in this poem, Hank.

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  4. Daffodils make me happy and warm as the sun. Love this!

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  5. Your conclusion does it for me, Hank:
    "A hue so pure, so warm, so bright"

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